Monday, July 20, 2009

112 tram North Fitzroy to city

Lost in a puddle
autumn rain and autumn leaves
Edinburgh gardens
goalposts barely held by gravity
Seagulls strut a patch of sun
‘council flats’
Dusty shoe tram boy reads poetry
- whose?

Trees burst from midget yards
Clouds on strings
Spiderman crouched on busstop
Poet rusts on plinth
Holden FJ ute in Brunswick street
drop dead beautiful
Jungular graffiti brilliant walls
Marquis de Sade
flogs leatherware

Labour in Vain
pub patrons well employed drinking
Over a forgetful shop
fossil tinsel
Marios
local heros make food
Central Hall
the ol’ TF Much Ballroom
True Blue Shoes
I wonder?
Tree stencilled on wall
with ghost koala
Persistence of possums

City Square
ghost of Vault ‘Yellow Peril’ II
Shops too full of objects
my imagination’s already full
Free:
Banksy’s rats and Little Diver

Still lost - Burke & Wills
stuck on
Collins & Swanston

5 comments:

Paul said...

What a beautiful urban sense of place tribute poem, with a melancholic tone, ghosts, forgetful, rusts, the old city just persisting under the new. Very beautiful.

Jen Jewel Brown said...

Oh Paul, than you again, you are moe than generous and have completely got what I wanted to say. The layers are moving so fast now. I will see if I can dig out an old shot of me years ago in Venice with layers of posters tearing behind me, to place here one of these days soon.

vetti said...

thank you - love the layers and feelings that come thru in your writing...

Graham Nunn said...

There is a raw beauty you have captured here Jen... palimpsests informing us of the realities of the past.

Jen Jewel Brown said...

Thanks from some super bloggers in the Artosphere.